Friday, March 13, 2009

Hope

Ok guys, lets start. With your permission I'll put the first sentence and each time you want to add one do it in the comments please. There are no restriction about how many as long you don't put two in a row, OK?

HOPE

The light of the sun shines from behind a single white cloud
and the stars in us are begging for its light screaming out loud
The shadow of a branch is covering my hand,
the lilac opens its leaves, a new brand.
My eyes dare to dream touching a sunbeam,
that could quench my thirst for energy.
My heart catches a tear in a net of hope,
made of tiny stitches of a broken dream
keeping it from falling on the sorrow's slope.
The net is golden, the feeling high,
I heal my wings and fly and fly and fly.
Without regrets, no looking back.
The world is lying naked at my feet.
Newborn and pure is our hope.


I want to thank my poetry girls for their inspiration and a wonderful result.

13 comments:

  1. ...and the stars in us are begging for its light screaming out loud...

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  2. the shadow of a branch is covering my hand

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  3. the lilac opens its leaves, a new brand

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  4. My eyes dare to dream touching a sunbeam

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  5. that could quench my thirst for energy

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  6. My heart catches a tear in a net of hope

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  7. made of tiny stitches of a broken dream
    keeping it from falling on the sorrow's slope

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  8. the net is golden,the feeling high

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  9. I heal my wings and fly and fly and fly

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  10. without regrets, no looking back

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  11. the world is lying naked at my feet

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  12. Nice work!!! I'm proud of this poem, congrats everybodyyy!

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