WITH SPECIAL THANKS TO MY SNOOPSY...
The melting sky on the metal ice is stopped by the reflection of the sun at its sunset climax.
you've melt the ice, you've took the sun, but stiil you walk alone
The ice changes faces faster and faster: in mourning at night when Dark is its master,in shiny gold rays if Sun is its pastor :-)))
I like a lot your comment miss, even though it is not me who must judge. I like a lot Dili's also! I find it so strange, how your comments betray your personalities. You cannot hide behind your words.HAHAHA!! Super nice!
Man man man, you all make it difficult for me but it's very intreging too. I want more, more, MORE!
sorry for misspelling. we're hiding behind our smile. i've got to win the poem, so pascal here I go again:I’m trapped between the falling suns and rising waters and hided by a frozen soul
It's surely me, it's surely lonely here among the ice trimming of the bulrush, it's sure that I won't wait in vain!
off-topic: And why do you want a winner Pascal? Nicely said Georgi.... Miss don't feel cold, spring's coming!!!
I think it motivates people a bit more to win something even if it's something little as my price is. Also it will motivate me to write a super moem for the winner so 'common give more of your talents.
i’m trying to follow Pascal’s requirements, to write a sentence as the main idea for the poem. I’m not feeling cold, i’m actually happy cause march is here, it’s sunny and it’s fridayyyyyyy
Sun melted on ice
Good job Miss, it;s Saturday alreadyyy!Pascal: youlre right, and the prize is great! My next try:The Sun kindly asked a tree to bend so that he could see himself in the mirror made of ice.
dili, i think pascal will have to write 2 poems ;)my next try:he fights the biggest trees, he gets the smallest bushes, but does he loose his poetry?
Hi Peeps. I have to say one thing: YOU ARE SO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!! I realize I made it difficult for myself but it also gives me great satisfaction to see you really take the best out of yourselfs. And I alrady have a idea for a new assignement! When shal I reveal the winner? Today? Sunday? Wednesday?..........?Sunday!